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The JAAKSONS: "Laurel"

(Jay and Acacia Kooky Spin-Off Nerd Society)

Summary: There was Nenya, who is called the Ranger-Luster, and Rosie, called the Sam Fan Extraordinaire, and they bethought themselves to join the Protectors of the Plot Continuum, out of love for Tolkien, admiration for Jay and Acacia, and general well-intentioned naiveté. With them came Glorfindal, mini-Balrog of OFUM, and many were the adventures that followed them. The story they tackled in their first mission may be found here.

Chapter 1: "Laurel"

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Two girls stood outside a tall gray metal door. One was a few inches taller than the other, but still rather short. She had dark red hair and blue eyes, with glasses that were about three centimeters thick. She was wearing plain jeans and a black shirt with white...jagged lines, it looked like, or are those letters? You can never tell. A thin cloak of grey filmy material was wrapped about her, fastened at the throat with a leaf-shaped brooch that looks rather familiar.

Her partner was short and rather round, with short brownish-blonde hair that blew all around her face and got in her green-gray eyes. She wore dark jeans and a shirt with what looked like monkeys hanging upside down on the front. She also wore a cloak, nearly identical to the redhead’s, save with a slightly different brooch, this one looking as if it were hand-crafted. The two had been worried that the department might not take them on, seeing as how many Sues have red hair and green eyes, but that was before the short one had pointed out that they were applying because the poor people were so understaffed and would take anyone...even them.

Behind them, an altogether frightening beast towered a few feet above the doorframe. He had all the physical characteristics of a Balrog, but he was much smaller. His flame-whip was stowed carefully in his belt, and he was doing his best to look docile. The redhead turned around after knocking and patted him on the head, though she had to use a rather large step-stool to do it.

“You sure they’ll let you bring him in there?” asked the shorter one, eyeing the creature dubiously.

“They better,” her friend replied. “If they don’t want Glorfindal, they don’t want me. Isn’t that right, Glori-poo?” she asked, hugging the Mini-Balrog. He nuzzled her with his fiery nose.

The redhead carried a dark blue backpack, a pillow, and a water bottle. Glorfindal was carrying another black bag of hers. The blonde was substantially more loaded down, with a larger pillow, a much more overstuffed backpack, a blue tote bag, a portable CD player case, and several long tubes sticking out of a rather heavy-looking bag marked “Wall stuff”. The redhead had just knocked on the door (because she had a free hand), and since she was an author insertion, it didn’t knock like it would for normal people, it nokked.

They only had a few moments to wait before a harried-looking wisteria plant wearing a rumpled track suit answered the door. Yes? it asked in an odd noiseless voice. If you’re selling something, we aren’t buying... It noticed the creature behind them, jumped back, and glared. And a Mini-Balrog...evildoers and friends of Cam! We will not give up any more agents to her insanity! If you want applicants for OFUM, try

“Er, no,” said the redhead, Nenya, being the first to recover her wits. “We’re here to apply for a job –”

They never got a chance to finish. Two blue-flowered fronds shot out and grabbed them, pulling them inside and slamming the door behind them. If Glorfindal had not had the speed of a Mini, he would have been left behind. The wisteria locked the door rather hurriedly. Thank God! it non-yelled. This way...

The sisters found themselves being pulled along a long grey corridor. The wisteria had curled its fronds around each of their wrists and was cutting off the circulation to each hand.

“Ow ow ow ow know, I’m, ow, not going to be much good as an agent, ow, if I’m missing my right hand, ow!” Rosie tried to uncoil the frond from her wrist.

Sorry, the wisteria plant apologized briefly, but did not relent. He dragged them through endless gray hallways until they came to...a wall.

The wisteria let them go and stood there expectantly.

The sisters looked at the wall, each other, and back at the wisteria plant.

“It’s a wall,” Nenya said, earning her a high score in the Hall of Most Obvious Statements.

Oh. The wisteria looked ashamed. He quickly reached out and tapped a meaningless pattern on the metal. Suddenly, the girls felt a shove from behind, and they stumbled into a room whose walls were painted (surprise!) gray. Glorfindal followed them in and stood over Nenya, his wings spread protectively about her and Rosie. The door slid shut behind them.

There was a desk in the center of the room, made of some sort of undefinable gray metal. A swivelling chair was turned away from them.

New recruits? The non-voice sounded almost excited. Can it be?

“Yes it can,” replied Nenya confidently. “We’re here to help you out.”

You sound remarkably sane. The chair swivelled around, and they were met face to blossom with the famed Sunflower Official, a bizarre-looking sunflower in a gray suit. It tilted its head up to once-over Glorfindal, and turned back to the two indifferently.

“God, is everything in this place gray?” muttered Rosie.

I heard that. Well, my dears, come closer.

The sisters exchanged a look, and warily approached the desk.

Two fronds reached out and grabbed them by the chins. Well, you’re breathing. And you can speak. And you do not appear to possess any flamethrowers.

“Hee hee....fiiiire....” Rosie’s eyes got big.

The SO raised a petal (eyebrow). I shall choose to ignore that statement. And that...thing, I assume, is tamed?

“Yes,” Nenya replied proudly. “Glorfindal is very obedient and only cruel to Mary Sues. He doesn’t eat much – raw eggs, bacon, and the odd fangirl.”

Glorfindal tried not to drool – he hadn’t eaten in at least five hours, and he was rather hungry. The mention of his favorite snack made his stomach growl.

Good. And I see by your attire, that if your preferred genre is what I think it is, that you are very dedicated and know your canon. Very good. Fill out these forms, and you can start work today. It threw a stack of papers at them.

“Yes, sir,” they replied obediently. They picked up random pens off the desk and began scribbling away. Glorfindal amused himself by doing target practice with his whip on some scattered papers tacked up on the wall of the SO’s office. The SO looked a bit peeved, but allowed it to pass.

All was quiet for a few moments, until –



“Am I sane?”

“Compared to Hika...yes. Compared to Mr.”

“Ah.” Rosie began to scribble again. Then,



“What is our preferred area of work?”

“Lord of the Rings. Any genre except slash.”


After a few moments, they both finished at the same instant.

They blinked.

“Wow...that was a plot hole...” Rosie commented.

Those are abundant around here. The SO snatched up their papers and organized them in an instant. Good, good, good...REALLY? you’re both an 8 on the sanity test?!?!?!


YOU’RE HIRED! The SO threw a pair of black uniforms at them with the symbol of a spoon in a dish on the left sleeve. Lord of the Rings. Multiple Offenses department. We’ve only got two or three teams working there. We’ll channel them so you don’t get any slash. The Mary Sues are abounding, however. You’ll have quite a few of those. You’ll have to kill a lot...

“Oh, we won’t have a problem with that,” Rosie said, a strange light behind her eyes. Both the SO and Nenya subconsciously backed away.

Go. Go go go go. Change into these uniforms. The Head of Operations will take you to your Response Center. Your Mini can stay with you, but he can’t accompany you on missions...

“The Head of that the blue flowered thingy?” asked Rosie, showing off her remarkable lack of scientific vocabulary.

The wisteria, yes. The sunflower stamped each of them on the forehead with a rubber thing that said “S.O. Aprroved”.

“ spelled approved wrong,” Rosie pointed out, looking at Nenya’s forehead.

That’s because I’m special. Now get out of here.

The sisters obeyed, still a bit dazed. They stumbled out the door and followed the HoO into the ladies’ restroom, where they changed. Then they were given instructions on how to get to their response center, and left to survive on their own.

They were still standing in the middle of the hall, dazed, rather uncomfortable in their starchy black uniforms, with their Elven cloaks that hadn’t settled down yet dancing around and refusing to be still, with Glorfindal carrying all of their things, when Jay and Acacia happened by. Jay and Acacia! If I were to tell you only a quarter of all I have heard about them, and I only know a very little of all there is to know, you would be prepared for any sort of remarkable tale. But enough with the corny swiped lines.

But of course, though Rosie and Nenya had heard of Jay and Acacia and all their marvelous exploits, they didn’t recognize them, possibly because they were still a little dazed...that and the fact that the two famous agents were disguised as a pair of Uruk-Hai.

“EEK!” the shorter (but still remarkably taller than either Nenya or Rosie) Uruk squealed, grabbing the arm of the other. “JAYJAYJAY! NEWBIES! NEWBIES WITH A MINI!”

“Newbies? WHERE?” The other creature spun around and stared straight at them. “YE GODS! IT IS! OHHH SWEET VICTORY!” They grabbed each other and danced around in a circle, a rather strange sight with Uruk-Hai.

Nenya and Rosie backed away slowly.



“We’re scaring them.” The taller one gestured to the frightened recruits.

“Oh. Silly, Acacia, remember – scare everyone but new recruits.”

Her partner patted her on the head. “Good girl.”

“We’re terribly sorry about the disguises,” Acacia said, turning back to the girls. “Our console screwed up, so we stayed in our disguises through one of those free-floating plot holes. We’ll change back as soon as Makes-Things fixes it.”

“Ah.” The girls did not look much less frightened.

Jay fixed her eyes on Glorfindal, and let out a shriek. “He’s so cuuuute!!! Ooozagoodboyden! Oh, yes, you are! Yes, you are!” She threw her arms around him.

Glorfindal looked a bit taken aback. Nenya glared. “Glorfindal’s MINE, thank you!” she growled, hauling Jay away from her precious Mini.

All of a sudden there was a bang, and then a funny sizzling sound, and then a pff (onomatopoeia stolen from the Harry Potter/LOTR crossover done by the original PPC). The world flickered bizarrely before their eyes...

..and instead of two ugly Uruks in full war gear, they were suddenly faced by a pair of young girls, younger than Nenya but older than Rosie. There was a tall, gangly one with messy reddish hair and a shorter brunette wearing a pair of glasses. They both looked like assassins-turned-friendly, the effect rather disturbing.

“Hi,” the taller one volunteered. “I’m Jay.”

“I’m Acacia.” They both smiled and grabbed the girls’ hands and shook them vigorously.

“Ohhhh, right!” Rosie said all of a sudden. “The flake with the camera and the bloodthirsty homicidal maniac! I’ve heard of you.”

“That’s us,” Acacia replied with a smile. “Come on, we’ll take you to your response centre!” She grabbed Rosie and yanked her down the hall. Jay and Nenya rode on Glorfindal.

Soon enough, they reached another grey metal door, this one with a knob. Acacia threw it open and ushered the newbies inside. Jay reluctantly hopped off Glorfindal’s back.

“This is your response centre,” Acacia said proudly, gesturing to the room around them. It was gray (wow, big surprise) and metal. There were a couple of high-backed chairs next to a huge gray mainframe-computer-like machine with a screen and a lot of interesting-looking buttons and knobs. A rather tight uncomfortable-looking couch upholstered in scratchy gray material was set at the other end of the room, and a few cupboards with large doors hung on the walls. “Get used to it – you’ll live here until they decide to liberate you.”

Both new recruits looked rather frightened.

Suddenly, a loud “beeeeeeeep” jolted through the air, not from the computer in this response centre, but from a room down the hall. All four agents jumped.

“VERDAMMEN!” Jay yelled, and went running down the hall, Acacia following her. Screams of “What the HECK?” and “I swear, they give us all the hardest ones!” filtered through the gray metal door, and the sound of something whacking against metal was followed by the crunching and electronic sizzle of a computer being destroyed.

A second later there was a cry of “A MONKEY?”

Both newly-recruited agents decided they didn’t want to know.

Nenya shut the door.

Rosie looked at Nenya.

Nenya looked at Rosie.

“Posters?” Rosie ventured.

“You can put them up. I have reading to do.”

“Where are you?”

“Eowyn and Faramir.”


“These tears you cry...have come too late...take back the lies....the hurt, the blame...” Rosie sang along with Gollum’s Song as she put up a large poster of the Fellowship on the door of one of the cupboards. Glorfindal was sprawled on the couch with Nenya sitting cross-legged in his lap, reading a part from The Return of the King.

A tear slipped out of Nenya’s eye. “Oh, Rowie, do you have to sing that?” She wiped her eyes on her sleeve. “I’m gettig by uniforb all wet!”

Rosie rolled her eyes. “Geez, you’re too sentimental for this job.” She continued singing along with the song playing in her earphones. “And you will weep when you face the end are lost, you can never go home...”

Nenya plugged her ears and began singing at the top of her lungs. “IF YOU SLEEP, YOU SLEEP WITH GOD...AND IF I CRY, IT’S FOR MY HEART...”

“AIIEEEE!!!!” Rose screeched. “Fine.” With the lightning speed that comes from years of changing CD's in science class while your teacher’s back is turned, she had her CD back in its case, stowed safely in her pack, and had the Matrix soundtrack playing before Nenya had time to get past the third line. “Du...du hast...du hast mich...” She lapsed into Rammstein from Gollum’s Song remarkably quickly. She climbed down from her chair, dragged it over to a designated spot above the console, and began tacking up a large poster of Frodo with the Ring.


“Hey, our first mission!” Rosie beamed. She stepped down from her chair and pulled off her headphones, leaning towards the screen. “It better be suitably bad...hmm....this isn’t THAT bad...but...OH NO!” She curled up in the fetal position and began to rock back and forth. “The pain,” she murmured.

“What is it?” asked Nenya. “On second thought...maybe I don’t want to know.”

“It’s a code 10, hair 27696,” Rosie whimpered. “Remember how you said that those were usually the worst of all? Let me put it bluntly: THIS ONE IS! It’s another of those second-daughter-of-Elrond fics – that should tell you a lot – and ELROND DOESN’T KNOW ABOUT ARWEN AND ARAGORN.”

“Oh Eru,” Nenya muttered. “Now HE, of all people...”

“Exactly,” Rosie agreed as she climbed from her spot and went over to the console. “What shall we be this time?”


“Sure – oh, SHIESSE.”


“We have to be Orcs,” Rosie said glumly. “We have to infiltrate their ranks and RESCUE ARWEN EVENSTAR.”

Nenya closed her eyes in exasperation.

Rosie decided that no more words were needed. She reached over and tapped a button on the console. A weird-looking oblongish plot-hole-deus-ex-machina-type doorway appeared in midair.

Rosie blinked. “” She grabbed her pack – containing just her CD player, her CD collection, and her nifty new Canon Character Analysis Device, provided by Makes-Things. Nenya had a Non-Canon CAD, designed to tell who was a bit character and who was a Sue. They couldn’t wait to play with them. Attached to the outside of Rosie's pack were a sleeping roll, a large Uruk-Hai bow, and several short thick black-feathered Uruk arrows in a leather quiver. If you looked closely, you would see that one of them had a couple of Nenya’s hairs stuck under the arrow-head–on the off chance that they'd actually be hired at the PPC, Rosie had been practicing with her bow and arrows for the past week. She wasn't yet a perfect shot. Nenya had dodged, but her hair hadn't.

They both stood before the portal, carrying their gear. There was an awkward silence.

“You first,” Rosie motioned for Nenya to use the portal first.

“This was your idea.”

“You’re the better fighter. If you fall into an orc-fight, you can defend yourself better.”

“Thanks a lot.”

Finally, Rosie, being the foolhardy one, gulped, and all of a sudden leaped through the portal and landed rather solidly on...

...a hobbit’s bedroll.

Something moved under her. A head of curly, sandy hair popped out. A muffled voice shouted “Hey!”

“Wak!” Rosie hurriedly crawled off the bedroll. That’s when she noticed she had landed on Sam.

If Nenya had not arrived at that moment and pulled her swooning sister out of Sam’s line of vision, she would have been dead. As it was, Sam sat bolt upright, yelling “Strider!”

“Yes? What is it?” came a deep voice from their right. Nenya’s face lit up.

Strider came crashing through the underbrush, looking manly, rugged, and fully the King of Gondor in disguise. Nenya’s mouth dropped open.

“Er,’s Strider...”

“Gleep...” Nenya couldn’t keep her eyes off the ranger. “He’”

Rosie was having similar feelings towards the scared hobbit in the bedroll. Neither of them were focusing on the conversation at hand.

Rosie snapped out of it when Sam turned away. “, Nen...was this part of the story?”

“No,” Nenya replied, turning a devilish smile on her. “But I figured neither of us would mind.”

“Aha.” Rosie grinned, the effect rather frightening on an Uruk-Hai.

“Strider! An orc! It landed on me!”

“What gripping dialogue...” Rosie said glumly. “SAM DESERVES BETTER THAN THAT!”

Nenya reached out and tapped a few buttons on some sort of electronic thing in her pocket. The world snapped and fizzled and went pff (onomatopoeia stolen from abovementioned crossover), and suddenly Sam was sleeping again, and Strider was sitting on the side, smoking a pipe, humming something in Elvish, looking thoughtful.

“Ohhhh...” Nenya was out of it again.

Suddenly one of the bedrolls (not Sam’s, to Rosie’s disappointment) stirred. Frodo’s dark brown curls and (debatably) darling blue eyes popped out. He watched Strider for a moment in silence, trying to comprehend the elvish words.

Tinúviel elvanui Elleth alfirin ethelhael
O hon ring finnil fuinui A renc gelebrin thiliol,

Strider sang, confusing Frodo slightly, and sending Nenya into swoons of ecstacy.

“Who is she?” Frodo spoke up, looking up at Strider.

Strider looked puzzled. Frodo elaborated. “This woman you sing of.”

“He’s so hot when he’s puzzled...”

“Mmmm....” Rosie replied dreamily. She was something of a Strider fangirl herself, though her real loyalties lay with Sam.

“Tis the Lay of Luthien. The Elf-maiden who gave her love to Beren, a mortal,” Strider replied sadly.

“Lay of LEITHIAN, damn you,” Rosie muttered to no one in particular. “If it hadn’t been for certain things such as ‘lawsuit’, I’d be afraid they’d send us to exorcize the movie one day.”

“What happened to her?” asked Frodo curiously.

Strider looked away. His face bore a hint of tears (at least according to the FOTR SE DVD transcript). “She died.”

Frodo looked surprised and sad. Strider turned back to him. “Get some sleep, Frodo.”

Frodo burrowed back under the covers and tried to sleep. Strider continued looking thoughtful and humming, blissfully unaware of the pair of Uruk-Hai standing there, ogling him.

After a moment, Rosie got up and walked around to see what Sam looked like when he was asleep, while Nenya crawled closer to Strider to inspect the pipe he was smoking. She then nicked the extra one out of his pack and began kissing it.

Rosie was inspecting Sam’s frying pan. She was seriously considering snitching it, until she remembered a few words, like “Movie-Verse” and “The Frying Pan of DOOM”. She settled for inhaling the Samwise’s-cooking-smell deeply, rubbing it all over a handkerchief, storing the handkerchief in a plastic bag and placing it carefully it in her backpack, and regretfully fastening the frying pan back to his pack.

She crawled back to Nenya and tapped her on the shoulder. “Er, Nenya...”

“Wha?” Nenya was in a daze because she thought she'd heard Strider sighing something to himself about liking red hair.

“Don’t you think we ought to get going? I’m not exactly keen on the idea of following a Ranger for two weeks weighted down with fifty pounds of Uruk-Hai gear...”

“Oh, yes, certainly.” Nenya sighed and regretfully bade the oblivious Strider farewell. She was about to open a portal when she turned to Rosie with a pleading look.

Rosie sighed. “What now?”

“Pleeeease can we see Strider at Weathertop?”

Rosie brightened. “Sure!”

Nenya entered the info into the activator. A moment later, a portal flickered into existence. Through it could be heard the sound of Nazgul screeching, and they both spied a single dark figure, sword drawn and glinting in the light of the moon, running up the side of a hill, the top of which had the remains of a tower on it.

They looked at each other, grinned, and stepped through.

Frodo was invisible. Five Black Riders stood over him, one with a sword jabbed into Frodo’s invisible shoulder. The blood was visible, and the effect was rather disconcerting.

“Eww...” Rosie wrinkled her nose.

All of a sudden, there was a Rangerish yell. Strider leapt into the clearing, brandishing a fiery branch and a sword.

Two invisible Uruks crumpled up in a dead faint.

The dead faint, however, became a little less dead when a hobbit stepped on Rosie’s stomach.

“Oof,” Rosie mumbled. She woke just in time to see Strider clashing swords with the third Nazgul.

She awoke Nenya, and the two stared, openmouthed, as the Dunedan fought off the five Wraiths singlehandedly.

After it was over, they sighed resignedly and opened a portal to the OC’s entrance into the story.

“Laurel!” Arwen cried, running towards her sister, her dress flowing behind her as she moved quickly over the wet ground, sparkling with morning dew.

“Oh, God, NOT a ‘flowing dress’...” Rosie dropped her head into her hands and fell to the ground.

“Arwen’s sparkling with morning dew,” Nenya mused, as she studied the Elven maid clad in a flowing gown that was covered with iridescent dew drops. “That’s rather odd.”

“At least it’s not the Mary Sue,” Rosie mumbled. “Thank God for small favours.”

Laurel looked up from her writing and saw her sister, Arwen. “Sister, is someone hurt? Is father all right?” she asked, standing up.

Rosie peeked at the writing pad the Sue had disregarded and read a few lines of what she was writing. She began to cackle.

“What?” asked Nenya warily.

“These Sues are stupider than I thought. Look at her paper.”

Nenya peered at the dropped writing-pad, careful not to let the OC notice her. “‘Legolas is like, so hot and I’m like, so going to marry him when he like, so totally falls, like, madly in love with my beauty and perfectness...this story is, like, going perfectly!’ Oh Eru!”


Arwen took a deep breath, and spoke, her eyes glimmering. “Yes. Father is fine. But, the fellowship will be arriving soon, with news.”

“One for the charge list,” Rosie muttered. “Causing the Fellowship to ARRIVE at Rivendell, already a group of Nine. In other words, sidetracking the whole fircken Quest just to please their little Mary-Sue whims.”

“It’s not that bad, yet,” Nenya allowed, watching curiously as the dew drops all over Arwen began to run down to the ground, soaking her dress. Arwen seemed not to notice.

Rosie did not reply. She was too busy beating her head against a handy tree. Nenya borrowed her Character Analysis Device, and held it towards Arwen.

[Arwen Evenstar. Elf female. Canon. Out of Character 14.4%]

“Well, that isn’t so bad,” Nenya ventured. Rosie just continued beating her head against the trunk.

Laurel nodded. Arwen practically danced. “Aragorn is coming. But, you mustn’t let on to father about us.” Arwen said mindfully.


The younger elf looked up. “What was that?”

“What was what, dear sister?”

The beep became more shrill.

“Shiesse!” Nenya hissed, fumbling for the mute on the device. She pressed it just as the Sue began to get up. She ignored the next story lines as she tried to read the text on the tiny screen.

“How bad is it?” Rosie moaned.

Nenya simply handed her the muted CAD.

[68.41 CHARACTER RUPTURE!] the screen flashed. Even with the mute on, it still was forced to let out a tiny bip...bip...bip at the horribleness of the scene.

Rosie rolled her eyes and stashed it back in her pack. “This is really, really bad. I mean really.”

They both, unfortunately, remembered their duty just in time to see Laurel (gag) wandering by on the path that was lit by “eerily romantic” light, humming a truly awful lullaby.

“Oh, ye gentle prince, upon the shore, come bring to me your wondrous gift. Of simple rose and spring’s soft dew, captured skillfully on the ivy.” she sang in her (VERY debatably [it sounded like a hoarse cow trying to imitate Brittany Spears]) melodic voice.

Nenya was quietly sick in a bush, while Rosie rocked back and forth muttering “Sam will save me, Sam will save me” to herself.

“Celebrian would never sing something that horrible,” Nenya muttered weakly. “But then again, Celebrian would never fall in love with –”

Rosie stopped her. “I really, really don’t want to know...”

“No, you’re right, you don’t. Never mind.”

Rosie pulled a pad of paper out of a plot hole and began scribbling. “Writing really bad songs and blaming it on Celebrian...being a second daughter of Elrond...what else have we missed?”

“Causing noble, honourable Elf-ladies to behave like human teenagers with a crush....oh, and causing Aragorn and Arwen to have a secret love affair.”

“Yes...YES.” Rosie nodded approvingly. Her pencil scribbled across the yellow legal sheet.

“What a beautiful voice you have. May I ask your name?” A voice interrupted the Mary Sue’s song, to the extreme relief of the PPC agents.

Laurel turned around quickly. She saw a man standing there. He had silvery hair, the color of the moon, and from what she could make out deep blue eyes. He stood tall, with a regal pose, and soft elfin features.

Both agents heard a rrrip, as if in a heavy fabric.

“What’s that?” asked Rosie, turning around.

“Just a major rip in canon,” Nenya replied, studying her Device. “New Mini-Race. Thousands of half-sized Balrogs trying to get through the curtain of bad-writingness to get to Cam.”

Rosie moaned. “Elfin? ELFIN?”

“Not to nitpick,” Nenya added, while rifling through the contents of her backpack for her CD player to numb the pain, “but Legolas is not a man, and being a daughter of Elrond, she should know that.”

“Charge list!” Rosie hurriedly pulled out the yellow pad and scribbled. “Charges D9 and E2!” Rosie had made it her business to know the Official Charge List off by heart.

“Whatever,” Nenya mumbled, pulling out a CD player. “Shiesse! Neither Lianna Klassen nor Enya are loud enough to drown this you have any harder stuff?”

“Uhh, I’ve got...Creed, Rammstein, Our Lady Peace, Delirious and Avril Lavigne,” Rosie replied, rummaging through her things.

“Gimme,” Nenya ordered, holding out her hand, not really caring which band she got. Rosie handed over Weathered.

“Wait, one of us has to take notes,” Rosie protested, as Nenya jammed on her headphones.

“Can you do it? I’ll take the banquet...”

Rosie scanned the Words. “Okay...but you have to take the walk with Legolas in the morning, because the walk in the garden is exceedingly painful...”

“Fine by me.” Nenya was already lost in Bullets. Rosie suspected that if her sister had bothered to check the words, she would not have agreed so easily. But there were reasons why Rosie had considered her alternate personality as a candidate for the Ultimate Evil.

Rosie turned back to the story, pen and legal pad in hand and ready for battle – to find out that through a cruel and unsummoned plot hole, she had missed nothing through her dragged-out-in-hope-of-missing-the-painful-parts discussion with Nenya.

“My name, sir, is Laurel, daughter of Lord Elrond, sister of Arwen.” Laurel replied, bowing shortly. “May, I have yours?”

“Legolas Greenleaf.” he said, bowing too. Laurel smiled slightly. “Are you part of the fellowship?”

Rosie groaned. Several charges came to mind, and she began to scribble furiously.

She scanned the Words up to where Nenya was supposed to take over. It seemed excruciatingly painful, and there weren’t enough charges to have to be there as they happened. Rosie hurriedly scribbled down a few charges, such as charge C 1.3 and Making Greenleaf a Last Name, and then pulled out a Discman, a pair of earphones and the treasured Human Clay.

When she could almost feel the spare litmus paper in her pocket turn red, she took them off and listened.

“When I was born, it was prophesied that I would contain a secret. A secret that only the one who truly loves me can reveal. No one knows what this secret it, but they know this curse. It’s a curse of the Heart, I believe. It’s very rare, and when the secret is revealed, it overcomes the bearer until it is fulfilled. If it’s not fulfilled by a set date, the carrier of it dies, and evil succumbs the world for one thousand years. The reason you have never heard of me, is because my father fears for my life. He fears the prophesy and has kept me under strict surveillance until now.” Laurel finished.

Ah, the cruelty of life and Laws. “At least she has a decent, albeit fairy-tale-ish and deus-ex-machinic, excuse for never being mentioned in canon,” Rosie murmured, wishing with all her heart that she had made Nenya take this part. “So who cast this curse in the first place, anyway? And why is she telling this random Elf, who she knows nothing about, everything about her deepest darkest secret?” She started humming Army of Love to take away some of the pain.

Legolas stared at her for a moment, not knowing what to say. “A few chosen people know of this, but as it comes into existence, more will know.” she continued.

“We are not the enemy, we are here to–oh, bloody hell. This cannot be this bad....”

“How did you come to get this secret?” Legolas asked, sitting down on a stone wall, next to a garden of peonies.

“My mother’s side of the family is said to be part enchantress, part fairy and part elf. Something when this sort of blood is mixed, it causes a curse of this.”

“It’s this bad,” Rosie groaned. She began methodically beating her head against the stone wall on which Legolas was seated. Luckily, the Elf was too taken by the Sue’s magical enchanting I’m-so-beautiful-I-strike-you-dumb powers to notice.

“But why not to Arwen. Why you?” he asked.

“Arwen is perfect. I would never wish something such as this upon her. But, since you ask, I have no idea. I do not think anyone will ever know. It’s like why do I have brown hair instead of blue or green. And why do I have golden hair instead of brown, fiery orange or sable? Simply, because it just is.” Laurel finished.

“I wonder,” the PPC agent muttered, squinting and trying to make sense of that paragraph. “Brown hair instead of blue or green...golden hair instead of I the only one that confuses? Or maybe her hair’s changing colour as she goes...and, by God, don’t insult us golden-heads!” Rosie absently twirled a strand of her own frizzy golden-brown locks (which looked quite out-of-place on a dark-skinned ugly creature) around a warped Orc finger.

She glanced ahead a little bit, and winced. She poked Nenya, who had fallen into a bit of a doze. “This is your ballgame, Nen, I need some sleep. Gimme the CD, I need something to wash my brain out with.”

Nenya woke up after a few jostles. As the redhead was a heavy sleeper, Rosie had to take off her sister’s earphones and practically yell into her ear to get her on her feet.

Before hauling off to the woods to set up her sleeping roll, Rosie glanced ahead in the Words, as was her habit. She mumbled something about ‘shut off the volume, it’s an Aragorn sex-change,’ and headed out.

Nenya rolled her eyes and trailed after the Suvian and her Elven prey, humming the dreaded If You Sleep just because Rosie wasn’t around. Then she glanced up...and blinked...and blinked again. The Mary Sue was trying to ‘cast her eyes over her retreat’. With another glance at the words, it appeared she was also trying to create a painting inside her head, while Legolas attempted to see himself in spoken words...The effect was a maddening swirl of words in a paisley pattern.

Nenya shook herself to clear her head, and ignored the next few lines as she fished for silly putty in her bag. Silly putty was Nenya and Rosie’s official means of sanity; it worked very well when one was tense, impatient, or just plain ticked. The redhead began methodically working it over in her hands as she hung out inconspicuously in a corner of the great banquet hall that had suddenly appeared in the Last Homely House. Perhaps it was the Hall of Fire, but it was neither dark nor particularly song-and-poem-like, and there was no fireplace.

Out came the charge list.

A sudden break of tension signified the Sue breaking company with Legolas; suddenly, the inexplicably golden-haired Elf was momentarily released from bondage as Laurel abandoned him to go and speak with her father (who looked pained at having to deal with another unexplained second daughter) and ‘Lord Aragorn’ (who looked wary of this strange new menace). He wandered away, dazed. Nenya, feeling for him, gave him a pat on the head and a whispered assurance that it would be all right. He relaxed. Unfortunately, he was called on again presently, to talk about random boring things with Elrond as the Mary Sue displayed her patience and endurance as she listened politely.

“Lord Elrond.” Legolas was saying, giving the Elf a stiff bow (as he was very well aware it was not needed). “Lady Laurel.”

Laurel nodded back, and affixed a serene smile to her face. She watched as her father and Legolas talked. She stood quiet, and did not show her boredom as she had been taught to.

“And did not show her she had been taught to...she had been taught to show her boredom?” Nenya started giggling madly, thanking God that Jay wasn’t here to see Elrond being depicted as such a teacher.

As nothing interesting was happening for an undefined amount of time, Nenya aimlessly scanned the room for any elves she would happen to know...

..and laid eyes upon a magnificent golden-haired grey-eyed Elf, standing in the corner and speaking with some friends, completely unaware of any Suvian influence beyond the regular distortion the presence of a badly done OC adds to the environment.


Nenya’s heart nearly stopped. The Elven warrior was her reason for being accepted to SNAOL. Her Mini-Balrog was named for him. He truly was a great Elf...If only she had more time to speak to him. Perhaps, next mission, if she pushed for Elven disguises...

An ear-piercing shriek roused the hall and nearly split the PPC agent’s eardrums. A perfectly-manicured finger pointed at Nenya, and a gratuitous daughter of Lord Peredhel screeched “THERE’S AN ORC IN THE HALL!”

“Bloody hell!” Nenya cried, dashing for the exit before she was seen. Bad Nenya! her rational mind yelled. You know Upstairs frowns on drooling...And NOW look where it got you!

She managed to make it outside the doors before they caught her, utilizing a handy plot-hole that she’d found near the Sue. So, as the Elves rushed past her searching for the mysterious Orc, no one noticed her, even though she was calmly leaning against the side of the building.

The Sue, of course, stayed inside and directed things. When no orc was found, every Elf suddenly was returned to their proper place, and the story carried on as it had before.

In a few seconds, Nenya had to hide herself in the bushes and take notes as Arwen and her pseudo-sister giggled together like a couple of teenagers. All of a sudden, through a quirk of description, the very darkness rustled.

Very abruptly, the scene shifted from a nighttime outdoors to mid-day in an Elven bedchamber.

Nenya blinked. The change was so sudden, she had to cover her eyes for about five minutes until they would adjust to the bright sunlight shining through the windows.

“Wha-hop?” Rosie asked sleepily, yawning as she came up behind her sister, the quick transportation a result of their last remaining available plothole.

“Good morning. Darnit, Rosie, that was our last plothole! The Sue just heard a rustling and suddenly it changed to day, for no real reason whatsoever,” Nenya replied, firing off three different topics in the same sentence with practiced ease.

“Thank you. Sorry, I needed it. You know I can’t think in the mornings. Lovely, now she’s interrupted a nice dream about Sam. May I have the honour of murdering her?” Rosie yawned, replying in kind.

“Be my guest...I’m not one for blood.”

Rosie made a strange face. “Neither am I. Only the blood of Sues, especially ones after Legolas.” Rosie had been a Legoluster once upon a time, and old habits are hard to break.

They both turned their attention to the scene, just in time to see the Sue wake up from a long fitful sleep to see Elrond suddenly appear by her bed, where he had apparently been ‘anxiously pacing’ for some time. Rosie suspected he didn’t want to have any more to do with this Sue than he had to, and had made use of a plothole she’d left behind.

“Laurel, my daughter. You’re awake.” Elrond said. “You’ve been asleep for only one day, but I was worried.”

Laurel smiled slightly. “I’m all right, father. Is Arwen not with you?”

Nenya rolled her eyes. “I don’t think Arwen’s gained invisibility powers in the last day...”

Elrond was silent for a long time. “Arwen, was taken.” He finally said.

“Taken! Where?” Laurel cried, sitting up.

“Calm yourself, daughter. She was taken to Isengard.” Elrond said.

Nenya glanced at the Words, and grimaced. “You were right. Arwen’s been ‘kidnaped’, apparently with no one noticing, not even our ever-alert Sue. And apparently, for some unknown reason, they ignored her and just took Arwen...”

Rosie winced. “Brace yourself, here comes the .2 seconds in which she speeds ahead two and a half days...”

Nenya grabbed ahold of the nearest delicately-carved pillar.

“Get your rest. You’ll need it.” He said, then left, closing the door behind him.

Suddenly, with a glittery pink asterisk and a nauseating time-separator, the room gave a spine-tingling jolt, threw both of the agents across the room, and then settled calmly back in place. The Sue, of course, remained unaffected.

“Ow...” Rosie groaned, as she pushed herself up. “Dammit. Put down some Temporal-Spatial distortions, would you? Try charge B 1.”

Nenya obediently got out the charge list from her position half-suspended about four feet off the floor in the arms of a large decorative candelabra. The redhead was gifted with the ability to read or write in any position at any time, something Rosie greatly envied.

Then the blonde was forced to make a dive for cover under the Sue’s divan as she realized that they were no longer hidden. Had a second more passed, and had Rosie a fraction less of the instincts of being raised in a family of six children, she would have been seen. Nenya, however, was pretty much hooped.

Luckily, Laurel didn’t notice her right away, and she had time to slip down and join Rosie under the Elven bed. “That was close,” she whispered to her sister. “And you aren’t really blonde, you know. There’s more brown than there is blonde.”

“Quit reading the narration, it’s annoying,” Rosie replied. “And it sounds better to say ‘blonde’ than it does to say ‘golden-brown-haired person’.”

“Golden hair is very Suvian. Wouldn’t it be easier to call you a brunette?”

“So is red hair,” Rosie pointed out. “And I don’t like that word, brunette. Sounds like some sort of fish-catching device.”

Nenya looked at the words and groaned. “Can I tune out for a bit, Roslyn? This is nauseating...”

Rosie glared at her. “No. You promised, remember?”

Nenya rolled her eyes. “Fine.” She clutched the charge list and handed Rosie her pack. Then they both grabbed ahold of the passing plot hole that Laurel had used to get out to the garden in a matter of nanoseconds, and were pulled out over Rivendell and dropped about five metres away from the Sue.

Both managed to land so as not to attract attention, and then Rosie pulled out her CD player and two custom CDs their brother had burned for her. She slipped in the first and tuned into Jesus Freak. “Separated, I cut myself clean,” she started humming.

Nenya left her oblivious sister sitting in the midst of an Elven paradise (there WERE perks to this job), and singing rather off-key, and followed the wandering Laurel around, plugging her ears so she wouldn’t have to listen to the ‘random poems’ the Sue made up.

Suddenly, with no warning at all, Legolas appeared randomly at her side, and delivered his line “Good evening, again,” with a glazed look in his eye. Nenya winced in sympathy.

Laurel whirled around to face Legolas. “You, sir, have a habit of following me, don’t you.” She said, a smile tugging at her lips.

Legolas shrugged. “It could be that we just happen to be at the same place, at the same time.”

Nenya looked around for a handy wall, found none, and settled for beating herself over the head with her Official Handbook. She continued in this manner until finally, the Laws of Narrative Comedy decided to take pity on her and ended the scene early.

“Hey! Unfair!” Rosie protested, hoisting herself up from her comfortable seat. “How come the Laws didn’t do that for me?”

“I’m *special*.” Nenya stuck her tongue out rather childishly. “Besides, I read the scene in advance and documented all charges.”

Rosie glared. “Fine. So, can we kill her now?”

“Let’s wait till she sidetracks the whole Quest AND invites herself along.”

“She’s already done that...” Rosie fingered her crossbow anxiously. She wanted blood.

“No, Ros.”

Rosie grumped. “Okay, okay.” Temporal distortions always put the precision-loving Rosie in a bad mood. “And we can skip the very painful talk with Elrond. We can get her as soon as she sets out – she’ll be alone and unprotected. Except for ‘light Elfin armour’, which, since it’s non-canonical and not Elven armour, should be easy to shoot through.”

“What about her bow, ‘bundle of arrows’ and sword?”

“I’ll sneak in and –” Rosie paused, considering her own remarkable lack of grace. “On second thought, you sneak in, handcuff her and hold her, and I’ll charge and shoot her.”

“Fine by me.”

Rosie hoisted her pack higher on her back. “Lessgo.”

They reached the spot on the road just out of Rivendell by way of portal, just as the Sue was approaching on horseback. Rosie cursed silently – she hadn’t been counting on a horse.

Nenya just hid behind a rock and waited. Rosie shrugged and did likewise.

As the Sue clipped past on her horse, she suddenly sensed some sort of enemy presence. Stupidly, instead of riding away, she dismounted and looked around for it.

Nenya took this opportunity to leap out, grab her by the wrists and hold her down with one hand while she searched for the handcuffs with the other. The horse very wisely bolted.

“What are you doing?” she screeched, trying to wrestle free. “Let me go!”

Nenya just clipped the handcuffs on and held the girl in place. “Rosie,” she called. “It’s your cue.”

“You’ve got no right to do this to me!” Laurel squealed, throwing a typical Suvian tantrum. “I’m a daughter of Lord Elrond! I’m a princess of Rivendell!”

“Like hell you are,” Rosie said calmly, stepping out from behind a clump of trees to the right of the path. “My dear, Elrond has a total of one daughters, and if you think that we can let you force your way into this wonderful family, you’ve got another think coming. I’ve got some charges for you.” She pulled out the charge list, which was rather long indeed.

“But you can’t do this!” she wailed. “Everything was going perfectly until you showed up! Oh, Leggy, my Leggles, saaaaaave me!”

“Shut up,” Nenya replied calmly. “Rosie?”

Rosie cleared her throat and adjusted her spectacles. “Ahem. Laurel (Kudos to you for having only one short, bearable and almost Elvish name), you are charged with *deep breath* Being a second daughter of Elrond, writing really bad songs and blaming it on Celebrian, causing Aragorn and Arwen to have a secret love affair, causing noble, placid Elf-ladies to behave like a human teenager with a crush, having a voice like a sick cow imitating Brittany Spears and making Legolas call it beautiful, doing away with Elladan and Elrohir, covering Arwen in dewdrops (Quit glaring, Nenya, it’s a charge! *deep breath*), charge D 9 – causing an original character to have an unbearably beautiful voice, charge E 2 – displaying extreme stupidity, forgetting to separate your paragraphs, saying things that make absolutely no sense whatsoever, making Greenleaf a last name, charge C 1.3 – creating non-canonical races such as fairies and enchantresses, having contradictory hair, replacing the Hall of Fire with some strange banquet hall, charge A 1.4 – causing a character to act like a lovestruck fool, especially over an original character, charge B 1 – Causing time compression, *breath* And, last but not least, charge E 1 – REALLY annoying PPC agents.*” Rosie glared, stepped back, and drew her crossbow.

“What are you do –”



Rosie walked forward and pulled the arrow out of the Sue’s forehead. Remarkably, Sues didn’t bleed when killed; they only let off small puffs of glitter. Rosie examined the arrow, and stowed it in her pack for a souvenir, as the first Sue she had ever killed.

Nenya slung the body over her shoulder. “What should we do with her?”

Rosie thought a moment. “I always heard that the Cats of Queen Beruthiel were rather vicious when around spawns of the Enemy.”

Nenya smiled rather evilly. “Yes. Portal?”

The blonde pulled out a generator and tapped in the coordinates, and watched bemusedly as Nenya dragged the dead willowy character with confusing hair through the oblong door. She then followed, and the two watched satisfactorily as a group of clawed felines ate their dinner.

Then Rosie borrowed the generator and created a portal back to Headquarters. The two stepped through, and felt that rippling change of form that always happened when you changed from one being to another. Instead of two Uruk-Hai standing there, there were two sisters in Elven cloaks carrying backpacks.

There was an excited “Grrraarrr!” from the corner, and Glorfindal leaped out and hugged them both tightly.

They grinned at each other, and, just as if they were veteran agents back from their hundredth mission, dropped their things on the floor, flopped onto the couch and went to sleep.

Unfortunately, the computer refused to leave them alone.


“Utumno agar tummen!”

Rosie’s A/N: Well, it’s finally done! Nenya’s been on my back to finish this ever since she finished her chapter and posted it. I’d been putting it off; however, adding Luxury, Jay and Acacia to my MSN list and actually getting to *talk* to the heroines inspired me greatly, besides the fact that they hinted at a new chapter coming out soon. Happiness is oh so wonderful!

Oh, and the fact that Nenya’s coming home in two weeks helped too! :D I am ecstatic. The only reason I’m not bouncing off the walls is because I haven’t eaten any sugar in the last week, specifically to keep myself calm.

Oh, and ‘Utumno agar tummen’ means ‘bloody hell!’ in Elvish. :D

Nenya's A/N: Rosie wrote most of this chapter, and I just helped with beta-reading and real-life inspiration. If you count general insanity and nagging as 'inspiration'. Actually, I've been more active in supporting other PPC authors than in writing, these last few weeks. But I hope you enjoy our latest chapter. There shall be more to come! And in case you haven't noticed, Rosie's taken up Creative Invective 101, which includes a lot of Elvish swearing. Sigh. And I thought she had innocent reasons for wanting to learn Elvish....!

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